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VAS
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0 posted 2004-09-21 07:14 PM



Time Unfolds

If time could run backward it would stumble and fall
over errors, misfortunes it’d trample them all.

The sunset would sunrise the twilight would break
the snow would come pouring right out of the lake.

Mountains would deepen and valleys would rise;
morons would flourish and idiots be wise.

Fish would start flying and birds most surely would swim
and I’d look a beauty to the likings of him.

But time marches on it does not go in reverse
the days we are given we cannot rehearse.

It’s one time through from beginning to end,
we can’t take our words back nor un-enemy friend.

The best we can do is the best that we try
to go from the dawning until darkness we die.

Faith, hope and love are the things that survive
if we take them and nurture each day we’re alive.

Then the legacy we leave is of utmost import
it will linger in hearts of the ones we support.

The moments of time unfurl and unfold
they slip round the clock as each peal is tolled.

We cannot hold them nor make them turn back
so we fill what we can and pray for our lack.

Forgiveness is offered; it’s free for receiving
if we let it sink in; we’ll spend less time in grieving.

As the carnival coaster begins its rise and descent
it keeps on rolling 'til our ticket is spent.

©September 21, 2004

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

© Copyright 2004 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-09-21 07:17 PM


this rocks, Virginia
a well timed write

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2 posted 2004-09-21 07:20 PM


wise words


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3 posted 2004-09-21 07:21 PM


The best words I have read in a long time

Dave

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