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Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2004-09-19 09:05 PM

Yon, the dry earth which I’ve trod
‘til morn hath graced my eyes.
As stars beyond a wearied moon
painted my journey’s prize.

Beyond the clouds of yesterday,
the storms of rainy nights,
the winds that howl one’s breath away
beyond the city’s lights.

Beyond the cove of sailing ships,
the walk of salt shorn shore....
The crossroads to another place
as wandring souls explore..

Beyond the farms and furrowed fields
along the hedgerow’s grow.
Where oft the dark has yet revealed
what hath one’s mind to sow.

For in the spark of spiraling
an ember whispers me
to taste a bit of wandering
and ever to be free.

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

1 posted 2004-09-19 09:11 PM

Barry/very...

The traveling had taken you places, but the hardest to find is

For in the spark of spiraling
an ember whispers me
to taste a bit of wandering
and ever to be free.

Love this, as I know the feeling so well. One of your best!

devinechild22
Senior Member

since 2002-08-28

Posts 571

2 posted 2004-09-20 12:11 PM

I kept wanting to close my eyes and get lost in those beautifully visual words. Magnificent!

*Allison*

~~~***~~~Come away with me, Wendy. Come away to Neverland~~~***~~~

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

3 posted 2004-09-20 05:24 PM

I like this

Dave

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2004-09-20 05:33 PM

Mag-nificent One ~

Your poetry has a way of transporting me to places beyond the sea and trodden earth.

Enjoyed this emensely! Bravo Barry!

Linda

[This message has been edited by Earth Angel (09-20-2004 11:15 PM).]

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

5 posted 2004-09-20 06:02 PM

Very beautiful Barry .... there is that longing to experience freedom and to feel one with nature.
Love, Margherita

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

6 posted 2004-09-20 10:06 PM

Ah, the wanderlust, the eternal "around the next corner", I suffer this malady. You phrased it so beautifully-

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

E S West
Member

since 2004-08-31

Posts 116
California

7 posted 2004-09-21 06:39 PM

EXCELLENT... truly enjoyed the freedom..

E S West

"always be true to SELF, and follow your heart.."
" Ignorance is the root of all evil "

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

8 posted 2004-09-21 06:45 PM

"For in the spark of spiraling
an ember whispers me
to taste a bit of wandering
and ever to be free."

gypsy hearts understand this

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

9 posted 2004-09-21 07:15 PM

nice

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