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Into these arms
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Into these arms |
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sim0riah Member
since 2004-09-07
Posts 253Wyoming USA 
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Every time I think of you I can feel you by my side And even though your miles away This peace tells me I'm alright A calming resolution Eases my mind when in despair And when the stars come out at night I can feel you, flowing through the air My only wish in life Is to touch you once again To feel your hands upon me to touch your frail skin Relive the love that we once had Release the pain, wipe the tears away I dream at night you're by my side When I wake at the dawn of day In my life I know this is true I'm lost without you So now I keep on dreaming That tomorrow our fait will change Our paths will cross again And I'll here you call my name And into these arms you'll run As tears flow down my face As everything turns motionless A true loves embrace And into these arms My pain will be free As long as you are by my side I can again begin to believe sim0riah |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Peace and contentment are found in these words. Beautiful! The greatest beauty on earth, is |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
there is a hope of something wonderful in the air of your words..if you believe it, it will come....smiles and hugs....beautifully written and expressed. |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Sim I liked the words but in these days was it romance, summer, winter. The words are good but they didn't lead me to where you wanted someone to be. Dave |
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sim0riah Member
since 2004-09-07
Posts 253Wyoming USA |
Thanks for responding and the comments Everyone Dave I appreciate your critique and can see where you are coming from..I reread this one and Dance of desire and can definately see the difference sim0riah Only at night you can see the depth of the sun Sim0riah |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
to cross paths again... requires a willingness to take that first step beyond the wish |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
this was beautiful and spoken from the heart. but no one knows less u let them know  |
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