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forne_marin
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0 posted 2004-09-21 07:08 PM


So Low


It’s the little things you miss.

Her smell
Her taste
The warmth of her body as you hold her tight against you.


Tonight the moon is shining overhead.
Astronomers would call it a waxing gibbous.

I don’t know about all that, but what I do know is that it isn’t whole.

Nor am I.




Jonathan Long

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1 posted 2004-09-21 07:13 PM


beautiful


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2 posted 2004-09-21 07:14 PM


so sad
but well put

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3 posted 2004-09-21 07:40 PM


Yes

Like it

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how touching
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5 posted 2004-09-22 08:27 PM


Astronomers would call it a waxing gibbous.

I don’t know about all that, but what I do know is that it isn’t whole.

~*~

Honesty...a poet's friend.

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