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I don't know...
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
"I don't know..." These words fall holy from your lips. As if silence had a momentary voice. Yet nothing much to say. And simply yearned in soundful wonder... To taste the mystery of your lips. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ericc A bold display, enjoyed. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I would almost echo Sy... a bold move! |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
delicate- flowing with grace- whisper soft in its beauty.  SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
That silken bough, between full understanding and hope... A breathtaking depiction. TD |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Wow, Eric! I can see you haven't lost your magical, romantic touch. This was beautiful. Take care.......Sue I am in motion |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Oh those special phrases....don't we love 'em! In a world where "fine" means "not fine", "soon" can mean anything from "now" to "never".....well, for a fellow it means things are surely fine, or will be soon...or not....but we can console ourselves, because it's also true that "no" means "maybe", and "maybe" means "yes"! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
To taste the mystery of your lips. Mmmm yes, this nourishes  Enjoyed. Well I see you doing, What I try to do for me, With the words from a poet, And a voice from a choir, And a melody, nothing else matters. ~Stevie Nicks |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
a fine romantic touch...enjoyed |
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devinechild22 Senior Member
since 2002-08-28
Posts 571 |
A sweet little write with big things to say. *Allison* ~~~***~~~Come away with me, Wendy. Come away to Neverland~~~***~~~ |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Zen Master Katagari Roshi would often ask his students such unanswerable questions that through their confusion the only thing that they could do was shake their heads and admit "I don't know". To wish Katagari Roshi would smile and say...."good, good, keep this I don't know mind. This is Zen mind." And we don't know...we paint pictures and mental constructs aroind what we think we know. And these are our answers to a life of mystery. The Zen mind urges for walls to fall and the mystery to be free. "We don't know"...and it's alright. Because further within...we don't need to know. We are. And that's enough. Just sharing. Love, Eric |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
The more I read your words, the more I AM. ".... in soundful wonder". I love you, Zen Man and Master. Margherita  |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Eric, I don't know which I like better, your poem or response. Both are so well taken! Enjoyed! miscellanea |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ericc This caught me and made me think...such a way you have of writing, that I wish to be able to say so much with so little, too! |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
You have a touch with words Dave |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
yes, three wonderful words  |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
yes you have a way with words |
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