Open Poetry #33 |
Life's Sands |
Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
As sand is life born of the windward shore and waters flow the rivers clear to sea. Shall not the hands of one reach in explore forever bound to walk and wandring be. For life is but a particle at best to lie beneath the waves of waters blue. Where all are born to wade in solemn blessed till once again they’re born again anew. If not one’s heart does beat in climb of mount will then the eyes not see the cherished earth. For from the mount does flow the babbling fount and there the soul does find the gift of birth. For from the veins of man shall flow his will to flood a heart whose sound shall never still. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is a beautiful poem. |
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devinechild22 Senior Member
since 2002-08-28
Posts 571 |
HELLO AGAIN! I've been absent for a short while... being back makes me feel all goey inside and I must say... I missed reading your work the most! An accomplishment... well done! *Allison* ~~~***~~~Come away with me, Wendy. Come away to Neverland~~~***~~~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"For from the veins of man shall flow his will to flood a heart whose sound shall never still. " ~ How poetically profound! Your heart has a river of love, beauty, wisdom, wit, charm, and beauty flowing through it. Linda |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"If not one’s heart does beat in climb of mount will then the eyes not see the cherished earth. For from the mount does flow the babbling fount and there the soul does find the gift of birth. For from the veins of man shall flow his will to flood a heart whose sound shall never still." Wonderful write Barry...much enjoyed. Hugs~ ~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Magnus~ I was totally caught up in the rhyme and rhythmn of this one~ 'For life is but a particle at best to lie beneath the waves of waters blue. Where all are born to wade in solemn blessed till once again they’re born again anew.' You are playing with my Amen's ! So lovely is this thought~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Lovely, dear Sir. Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
For from the veins of man shall flow his will to flood a heart whose sound shall never still. absolutely beautiful! And Wise! You paint music |
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