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Conversations Moon Drenched |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
The fullness of your mind casts a shadow on your face Taking you to secret realms, leaving time without a trace And I hear the squeak of screened door close itself against twilight As the coffee sifts my fingers through the filter of last light There is nothing I can tell you that I haven’t once before As the steam of two cups rising wraps my consciousness once more So I carry warm the brewing to the step where you reside Just a verb I am reviewing of romance on friendships ride Self consumed you sit in silence just beyond awareness door And I sit upon reliance in the depths that came before Watching closely as the shiver of the night air thrills your spine Calling to my inner knowledge as the hand you feel is mine Looking out upon the likeness of the dreams you push away Seen reflecting on the surface of the lake pools jeweled display Ever faithful at your footrest just beyond the boundary line Wags the true friend you depend on and one other given sign Autumns coming, heartbeats drumming for a fireplace so warm Smiles brimming, worries slimming in a place of rustic charm Over easy, set upon you as my lips trace muscles clenched Mouthing spells a life’s enchantment on the step we cling moon drenched Copyright Kkh 9/19/04 |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
A wonderful read and such psychological complexity to surf through! Love and Joy. Margherita  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I wish I could sit at your table and listen to you speak these aloud... they always sound so good to my ear...  |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
I was there with you, felt with you. And your words, as always, so beautifully displayed. SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
TD, this is incredible. WOW! How do you do this? I need to get back here more often and study your work. Love this! Patricia |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
TD You always write so beautifully from the heart and further. Amazing, you! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
There is nothing I can tell you that I haven’t once before As the steam of two cups rising wraps my consciousness once more So I carry warm the brewing to the step where you reside Just a verb I am reviewing of romance on friendships ride Self consumed you sit in silence just beyond awareness door And I sit upon reliance in the depths that came before I want to write like you when I grow up!!  Kathleen, you're in a class by yourself, and your poetry is a perfect wonder to me. Thank you, always. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
K. you know that I have said before how I thought a particular poem was probably the best you had written... Well, I am gonna stop saying that, cause you continue to come up with one that probably is... This one probably is....but.... I didn't say that, did I? Well done Kiddo. You must be feelin' a lot better today... That is a good thing. |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
yesss this rules td you get better and better like the last part lots ~w |
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Daniel Storm Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 91New York |
Kathleen Harris, this is well done!!! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
basking in the moondrenched autumn about to be; just lovely, as always. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"Mouthing spells a life’s enchantment on the step we cling moon drenched"  what a cool line!In fact the entire write is such a delight, I'm keeping it.  |
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