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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Tinkle of a gate Rubbish on a monday Chance to talk catch the world Check who was who on sunday Over a gate garden talk Who was climbing who Hedge too high Grass too long Car not moved from tuesday Echoing sound sprinting around Olympics have no hope Catch the van or become estranged From the rubbish Delivered on monday |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dave, you convey the spirit of Sunday "performances" very well here, many want to live up to the expectances of the laws of "what is IN"... Love, Margherita  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ok, for what I have witnessed of this day, your country has every reason to be proud. There will be another day, another green... And I do enjoy your writing, Sir! |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Margherita, Sunshine I'd thought I would get a lot of stick for that one, yet I was listening to a Lady telling me how everything was the best you could ever have, and I only thought tonight how I would write it honestly. Thanks for your words Dave |
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