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DavePage
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0 posted 2004-09-19 05:53 PM


Tinkle of a gate
Rubbish on a monday
Chance to talk catch the world
Check who was who on sunday
Over a gate garden talk
Who was climbing who
Hedge too high
Grass too long
Car not moved from tuesday
Echoing sound sprinting around
Olympics have no hope
Catch the van or become estranged
From the rubbish
Delivered on monday

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Margherita
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1 posted 2004-09-19 06:01 PM


Dave, you convey the spirit of Sunday "performances" very well here, many want to live up to the expectances of the laws of "what is IN"...
Love, Margherita

Sunshine
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2 posted 2004-09-19 06:19 PM


Ok, for what I have witnessed of this day, your country has every reason to be proud.  There will be another day, another green...

And I do enjoy your writing, Sir!

DavePage
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3 posted 2004-09-19 07:13 PM


Margherita, Sunshine

I'd thought I would get a lot of stick for that one, yet I was listening to a Lady telling me how everything was the best you could ever have, and I only thought tonight how I would write it honestly.

Thanks for your words

Dave


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