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Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2004-09-19 04:25 AM

but they smile ...

it's a string ... bound between legs
and heart
thighs of want
  eyes of untrust
hands and heart raw ... flesh words
stroked
   and beaten
o f f
  from (censor) yous to
(censor)
me over
i stand on the shore of displaced
misplaced misfits
whose stockings wear holes that
run with mascara days down to
blooddrawnpuddles
   where the sockets to skulls hold
my secrets
  those times when only i hear their
voices they cry they cry
i soulcry heartbleed and reach for
  empty
i ... am
    empty
my arms ache for the fullness
of light but the dark
   the dark is heavy and it suffocates
and i choke on yesterday like blades
how it cuts
over and over i scream to no one
shadows can't talk ... but they smile
    and tomorrow hangs
on the end of a rope
©sdt'04

~~~~~
note to mods: this is not about suicide or cutting. but about coping with (or rather, the lack of) rape.

"Kind words can be short and easy to speak, but their echoes are truly endless."
--Mother Teresa

[This message has been edited by Snow (09-19-2004 11:30 AM).]

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

1 posted 2004-09-19 04:31 AM

Snow - this cuts deep and echos the cries of the soul. My heart to you. In my own family I see a member coping with such dread, anger and hurt - would that no one should suffer so.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

2 posted 2004-09-19 04:33 AM

I'm sorry.

Well I see you doing, What I try to do for me, With the words from a poet, And a voice from a choir, And a melody, nothing else matters. ~Stevie Nicks

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2004-09-19 09:12 AM

LadySnow~

Heart hugs to you ...
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email noles1@totcon.com

aujussy wolf

Senior Member

since 2003-08-09

Posts 1215
Michigan

4 posted 2004-09-19 09:23 AM

ohh man , hurt to read this one

looks to me like you could use a
vacation ...or maybe so

an escape

~w

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

5 posted 2004-09-19 11:08 PM

Sad but scenes that play out everywhere.
You gave voice to those who are suffering with
the pain.
Great job Snow.

:-)

C?
Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 190

6 posted 2004-09-20 12:13 PM

thats awesome, very vivid.

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

7 posted 2004-09-20 12:19 PM

your comments on this have been so very kind. thank you all. from my heart.

snow

devinechild22
Senior Member

since 2002-08-28

Posts 571

8 posted 2004-09-20 12:24 PM

I could feel the passion and feeling in this one... You did a wonderful job conveying the emotion... I give you "props."

*Allison*

~~~***~~~Come away with me, Wendy. Come away to Neverland~~~***~~~

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

9 posted 2004-09-20 03:42 AM

thank you very much

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