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ShiningWindHaze
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0 posted 2004-09-19 01:00 AM



I unfold my friendship to eyes like this my words splice minds and dice these lines, but not too much cause I still write things unknown never having to be right only what I am more...always more than this to kiss the grip of an angel within myself I thought of demons but stopped cause the thought is kind of scary still I live haze is hazy that I am thinking lost but found cause I'm here and my tears reveal my life and my pain speaks of my strife I feel You understand each mind that peeks through these random thoughts I thought and shared willing I am more than me cause I will it and long and taste and am inspired by every little thing and each moment so precious cause one day it will end and I cling by each word that I write and each word that I speak as I write from the depths of my soul seek to please another soul by my life to touch the depths of theirs so they will touch another loving to touch like I love to touch a lover please appear in a year when I'm most glad and happy to hold you forever for a moment meaning to think of it forever in one thought though it's not but it is cause I will it and I'm more than just this till I perish like a rose or as a human like me could feel the same and that thought is deeper than an ocean or a galaxy cause they don't live and dream and taste and eat and analyze and long for more than this

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Susan
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since 2004-03-27
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walking the surreal
1 posted 2004-09-19 01:03 AM


Yes there is more, even than I think we know of ourselves.  Each day a voyage of discovery.  Each word a new path to discovery.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

ShiningWindHaze
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since 2004-09-06
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2 posted 2004-09-19 01:11 AM


I want to absorb all light and beauty and shine like a wildfire from heaven burning up everything into love so that no ugliness can stand and hide from incineration. Then still, there is more than that. You're so right.

- Haze

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