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Open Poetry #33

Vibrant Turns

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2004-09-18 08:46 PM

The two-step pervades by will of this indenture
Familiar terrain pursues unequivocal adventure
Embroidery of fluttered leaves that fleet the air
Some bold, some muted into changing tones so fair

My skin takes hue of golden fantasize
Ablaze in blue light, twilight glazed my eyes
The searching sound in echo tone
Along the lines of foliage blown

So red, the maple leaves it’s covered bed
Swayed in sweater weather its gold crowned head
That plum of bearded birch congenial clustered ash
A rusty ribbon vines the blinds to make a festive sash

By bumper crop drops hickory nut
Make thick the bumpy ground in rut
Of furry friends in scribble scurry
Hoard winter stores chance snowflakes hurry

A rhythm wise perchance applies
In vibrant turns as autumn sighs

Copyright Kkh 9/18/04

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2004-09-18 08:57 PM

Not quite sweater weather here just yet...
it decided to be summer...LATE!

But this song...is THE song of fall...

and long may fall reign!

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

2 posted 2004-09-18 09:02 PM

TD, you write of seasons very well. Sad
to say that I have to echo Sun's comment
about Summer sticking around...

Waiting impatiently for Fall to arrive and
then I can turn off the AC!!! Yeah....

ShiningWindHaze
Member

since 2004-09-06

Posts 138
California, United States

3 posted 2004-09-18 09:05 PM

Beautiful.

aujussy wolf

Senior Member

since 2003-08-09

Posts 1215
Michigan

4 posted 2004-09-18 09:21 PM

ohhh wow
great write td
packs a punch
~w

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

5 posted 2004-09-18 09:40 PM

TD, you do make Autumn most beautiful with your delicate turns of phrase - this is a favorite -

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

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