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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2004-07-11 01:49 PM



Holding Earth Angel’s Muse Captive
~*Marge Tindal*~

Earth Angel’s muse done up and left her
She’s found a new place to dwell
You’ll find her splashing her ink-of-think
In Marge Tindal’s inkwell~

You’ll be so lonely Earthy
You’ll be so lonely you could cry~


And though she’s always splashing
You can hope she finds some room
To bring you back a thought or two
before you feel the gloom~

You’ll just be so lonely
You could cry~


Marge Tindal’s words keep on flowing
while Earthy Angel is dressed in black
Moaning and a'groaning
"Oh, please, please send her back."~

So if your muse has up and left you
and you’ve got a poetic tale to tell
Just take a walk down Florida way
for a dip in Marge Tindal's new inkwell~

You’ll be so happy to find her
you will cry~


~*~
Earthy Angel's title
is to blame for my fits of inspired laughter this afternoon~
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Thank you dearest Poetess~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

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1 posted 2004-07-11 02:01 PM


And laugher it is....thanx Marge....Now I
have to go find that errant muse....

Martie
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2 posted 2004-07-11 03:34 PM


Marge/sis

Thanks for the laughter!!!  

iliana
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3 posted 2004-07-11 03:46 PM


Marge, now you have me going!  LOL....jo
Susan
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4 posted 2004-07-11 03:47 PM


Tee Hee.  I'll be down for a splash in a flash!

  Susan

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5 posted 2004-07-11 03:57 PM


As Elvis would say, "Thank you! Thank you very much!"

This touched my heart so much, I could cry! Me, oh me, oh my!

Hysterically funny! This was certainly a wonderful of a surprise!

Since my muse is "visiting" your ink well, I'm sure she could learn a thing or two from your muse, Dear Contessa Poetessa!

I'll be a moanin' and a groanin' 'til my muse comes back to me.

Triple LOL, you're a hoot and a half! Love it ~ Love you!

Sending you a barrel of ha-ha's, you little monkey!
Bunch Of BananasMonkey
Laughing Baby
Love, Light, & Lots of Laughter,
Earthy One

Betty
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6 posted 2004-07-11 08:05 PM


Too funny Marge. You can make a poem from anything at all I do believe.
Love ya,
Betty

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7 posted 2004-07-11 09:55 PM



Oh Marge, did Earthies muse come visit you???
You did tell her to rush back, did you!

Enjoying myself here in loud laughter.

Titia

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

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8 posted 2004-07-12 04:14 AM


adorable!
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9 posted 2004-07-12 10:23 AM


Now we know who is to blame
When muses remain quiet -
Margie-gal, for shame, for shame!
You might just start a riot!!!
A crowd will surely line your street
In search of muses missing!!
Your honey won't think that is sweet -
It'll interrupt his kissing!!
Now... don't be greedy... c'mon... share
Your store of poetic ink
You really don't want us all there -
We're rowdier than you think!!!!

LOL... Loved this!!!!! *S*


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10 posted 2004-07-12 10:36 AM


ROTFLMAO!
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11 posted 2004-07-12 12:05 PM


LOL!  Thanks for a well needed laugh!  I only wish I could write as often and as well as you do Marge!  I admire you so!

Kelly

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There is no danger of developing eye-strain from looking on the bright side of things

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12 posted 2004-07-12 12:21 PM


Cute write gal....well done for a fine 'pome' 'righter'.....
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13 posted 2004-07-12 12:46 PM



Well now, I TANKA you all very much~

~I just wrote the laugh
Earthy Angel sent my way
I'm training her muse
to fly back home on this day
So get the inkwell filled up~


*SweetSuthernGal*
YOU ARE AS COMICAL AS THEY COME GIRLIE GIRL~

My sincere thankee's to all of you for enjoying this little Pfunny~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

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14 posted 2004-07-13 01:49 AM


Dear Marge:  Funny!  Really chuckled over this one and hope the muse made it back where you sent her!

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

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15 posted 2004-07-13 09:16 AM


Marge, your tickler of a poem certainly has spawned wonderful replies! Your readers love this aspect of your considerable talent as well.

Since my muse has been away, so have I ~ literally! As I read in your adorable tantric, I mean, "tankic", reply above, you are preparing my muse for her return to me ~ so I eagerly await her arrival! Please remind her to bring my pen back ~ full of blue ink! My insides are 'dyeing' to right again! lol

Love ya!
Your little Earthy One

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16 posted 2004-07-13 12:02 PM


Haahaa… Enjoyed!!

JL



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17 posted 2004-07-13 01:45 PM


Thank you, Marge! You were good to your word! My muse is back and she returned my pen full of divine blue ink!

~ Seems as tho' your muse taught her some of her trade secrets!


EO

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Thanks to all who wrote
Earthy One's Muse fled for home
Ink well full to brim
With old pen dripping new ink
Needed a Florida trip~


See sweet Earthy one, she's back after a refreshing trip to hang out with Marge's Many Muses ... might have learned a trick or two ... ya' think ?

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

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19 posted 2004-07-14 12:15 PM


Thank you Marge for treating my muse so inkwell, I mean "well"! You and your myriad of muses taught her a great deal and I appreciate the magic blue ink that you filled my pen up with. I hope it works as well for Merry and me as it does for you and your amusing minions!

This has been fun! I love your playful spirit!

Love you!
Linda

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20 posted 2004-07-14 12:34 PM


This was great Marge. Very entertaining.
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21 posted 2004-07-14 02:29 PM


This is wonderful!!!!

HUGS,
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." A. Brink


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22 posted 2004-07-14 02:36 PM


thanks for the much needed smile
Marge Tindal
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23 posted 2004-12-05 12:03 PM




Just enjoying some MORE Sunday morning archived-laughter here~

Holiday *Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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