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SEA 
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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 Suspended sentiment emotions caught in rhyme that moment, we will never have now somewhere lost in time it was our should have been that once upon an unstrung heart string the song we both hear yet were never able to sing always off by slight degree slipping by, our chances for what could have been our, we were meant to be that once in a lifetime love of you and me ~SEA~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Susan, Susan, you lady are the definitely the Queen of Hearts. That was incredible and of course Hanks is one of my favorite artists, so the blending of the two artists here ROCK BABY! |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thank you very much. It was you who introduced me to his art....I love it...so thanks for that too!  |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
"Suspended sentiment emotions caught in rhyme that moment, we will never have now somewhere lost in time" Catches you at the strangest times, huh? The reality of never again... Hiya Susan...  |
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*Belabebeautiful*
since 2003-01-03
Posts 696washington, USA |
oh that was so sweet, it just screams out to the hopeless romantic in me. Beautifully written. ~Live and Laugh~ Don't look to me for perfection for I will surely let you down. |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Beautiful Susan , you word your feelings perfectly .... by the way Steve Hanks is my favourite , I often attach his paintings to my poems when sending them via email to someone special Hope |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
dang, but this one is so sad! but so beautifully written, with photo to match |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Seems like the photo is gone, but the words remain...thank goodness! A wonderful weave, my SEA... |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
i feel this today... a lovely write  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
ahhhh yes, a familiar ring brings sentiments close and safe. Lovely write...touched a chord of soul...thank you |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
always touching .. and always a pleasure to read |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
a pleasure to read you again SEA, your words have been missed. This is extremely soft and beautiful! |
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msflame Member
since 2002-05-21
Posts 188 |
How freeing this portrait, both words and graphic. Love the thoughts this inspires. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetSEA~ 'it was our should have been that once upon an unstrung heart string' Ah, you knew I would know the rhythmn to this unsung heart song~ Thank you~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
this is beautiful, lovve the pic too The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
beautiful |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Suspended sentiment emotions caught in rhyme that moment, we will never have now somewhere lost in time it was our should have been that once upon an unstrung heart string ==================== ya had me from the title on  ya knew the moth was love this one.. love the melodics of this... an aching bitterswet beauty.. we wont ever forget that one that cut us the deepest... a moth anthem..and a keeper We go where there is love when ever we are lonely ... going back, we find, |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sea girl...So lovely, the pic and poem, and you! |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
~sniff~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful....James |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Thank you all very much for your great replies they mean a lot to me...and Duncan...yeah it's never when I expect it... |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
the poem and the picture were great , even better together ~w |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I'm not sure which was better...the poem or the pic, but together...wonderful!! Love the artist, will look him up |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
"it was our should have been that once upon an unstrung heart string the song we both hear yet were never able to sing" Perfect. I cannot tell you how these lines fill me... *hug*, Lizzie. "Time has told me not to ask for more, one day our ocean will find its shore" ~Nick Drake |
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