Open Poetry #33 |
Without a doubt |
inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
I felt your heart so pure and what better morning could it have seeped through than this, of sweeping greys, engulfing me within them; you see, my dear, they say i am soon to depart of this world, before the southern cross reappears, and the wish filled dawns soon dwindle, and this now, so everclear, arrives on wings, so free, upon your letter read, as you gift me with answers to endless poetic musings, of whether my touch ever did extend within your sacred spot, or if in fact you truly ever knew, (how i loved you so) as i now may pass without hesitation, to cross this bridge that links this tainted earth with eternal innocense, where such flowerchildren as you and I, soon reunite, as i know for now without doubt or reservation, upon this blessed place your love does await me. ***for you, as always, robert*** [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (09-18-2004 10:42 PM).] |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Such faith - love surpasses all barriers, seen and unseen. This is sorrow laced and yet lovely in its hope. Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
InkyOne~ This is truly beautiful~ There is that place ... that special place where all hearts of the earthly plane will someday gather again~ I believe~ I believe~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
So very eloquent and regal in the way you have written this one Michelle. Hugs, TD |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
"On ira tous au Paradis" (We shall all go to Paradise) ... this French song came to my mind, while reading your very touching and beautiful words. Love and hugs. Margherita |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
See, see, he wasn't a big bad wolf after all!! Beautiful flow of your love, goldielocks~ Are you going somewhere? Please say it isn't so. You know my imagination works overtime and now you've got me worried. I hope you're well Michele~ |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I can't stand my aol when it won't bump up. Let's try this again, one more time. Gotcha~ |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Michele? you see, my dear, they say i am soon to depart of this world, before the southern cross reappears, poetic license? right? This is beautiful . . . |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
yes yes its all licenced, i hope.....lol just mind working overtime ,due to some "female" stuff |
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Daniel Storm Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 91New York |
Inked goddess, crossing bridges is sometimes not easy but this is a strong and inspirational write. |
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