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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2004-09-18 03:44 PM




I felt your heart so pure
and what better morning
could it have seeped through
than this, of sweeping greys,
engulfing me within them;

you see, my dear,
they say i am soon
to depart of this world,
before the southern cross reappears,

and the wish filled dawns
soon dwindle,
and this now, so everclear,
arrives on wings,
so free,
upon your letter read,

as you gift me with answers
to endless poetic musings,
of whether my touch
ever did extend
within your sacred spot,
or if in fact you truly ever knew,
(how i loved you so)

as i now may pass
without hesitation,
to cross this bridge
that links this tainted earth
with eternal innocense,

where such flowerchildren
as you and I, soon reunite,

as i know for now
without doubt or reservation,
upon this blessed place
your love does await me.

***for you, as always, robert***


[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (09-18-2004 10:42 PM).]

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Susan
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since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
1 posted 2004-09-18 04:20 PM


Such faith - love surpasses all barriers, seen and unseen.  This is sorrow laced and yet lovely in its hope.

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

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2 posted 2004-09-18 06:52 PM


InkyOne~
This is truly beautiful~
There is that place ... that special place
where all hearts of the earthly plane
will someday gather again~

I believe~  I believe~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
3 posted 2004-09-18 10:10 PM


So very eloquent and regal in the way you have written this one Michelle.  
Hugs,
TD

Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
4 posted 2004-09-19 10:58 AM


"On ira tous au Paradis" (We shall all go to Paradise) ... this French song came to my mind, while reading your very touching and beautiful words.
Love and hugs.
Margherita

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
5 posted 2004-09-19 02:46 PM


See, see, he wasn't a big bad wolf after all!!

Beautiful flow of your love, goldielocks~

Are you going somewhere?  Please say it isn't so.  
You know my imagination works overtime and now you've got me worried.  

I hope you're well Michele~

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
6 posted 2004-09-19 02:50 PM


I can't stand my aol when it won't bump up.
Let's try this again, one more time.

Gotcha~  

littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
7 posted 2004-09-19 03:14 PM


Michele?

you see, my dear,
they say i am soon
to depart of this world,
before the southern cross reappears,


poetic license?  right?

This is beautiful . . .


inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
8 posted 2004-09-19 03:19 PM


yes yes
its all licenced, i hope.....lol
just mind working overtime ,due to some "female" stuff

Daniel Storm
Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 91
New York
9 posted 2004-09-19 04:24 PM


Inked goddess, crossing bridges is sometimes not easy but this is a strong and inspirational write.
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