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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Once upon a time we did walked into a garden hid behind a neon light of brand and left our footprints soft in sand where only daisies dared to bloom and I left angelprints by moon of impress of my duress, caress, I opened self to you in my glories petal pink blushing corals melding wrought iron thoughts I bought the park branding grasses lent in dark weeping passion branches bent and daisies cried as I relent myself unto the gods that sighed dawning that new day we died burnt by beauty in the dawn. Once upon a time we did... we made the daisies smile. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity To me, to me, LOL forgive me,I can't remember the time. A delight to read.  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I still know the way... *battin' eyelashes* sweets...  and I get a kiss too, you!  |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
made me smile too...beautiful just beautiful |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I wanted to kiss Helen before I creep off to the crypt...grin.  love ya ladyslick |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
love you right back...h |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
and left our footprints soft in sand where only daisies dared to bloom and I left angelprints by moon ~*~ One of your softer sides... singing this, I am, to the daisies... |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
You're a wonder, my friend, not just an ordinary flower either. So enjoyed this playful!  |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Serenity, This was a fun read filled with quality, as always. (I think I've been to that place before!) Enjoyed, miscellanea |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
This daisy side of you is especially endearing. "to you" I give a warm hug and smile.  EA |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
nice bloomin write  you are a one-of-a-kind daisy |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
You are a daisy picked straight from Serenity's Garden.. Lovely this...lovely you... A keeper for sure. Love ya lady~ ~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Have I told you I love you? No I mean, really love you. This is beautiful.. YOU are beautiful. It's a  M Well I see you doing...What I try to do for me....With the words from a poet... |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
K? you know I always have such a twisted interpretation of things, but My God I instantly saw a spiritual thing goin' on here. It made me think of God, at one time, having faith - walking (footprints), believing . . . (to you -->> to Him). . . in a non-sexual sense, of course. But a loving sense,of completely giving one's entire self to another. It is absolutely beautiful, as is your heart . . . |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Flowers are a thing of beauty, and an expression that gladdens the heart and brightens our days. But I kinda of wish he'd never sent them in the first place, cause I knew in my heart, they were bound to die. Anyway Serenity, you write so nice. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
smiling with the daisies here...there's a story behind this, and those I've been known to tell stories are welcome to e mail to find out. Fraid it wouldn't pass forum decorum.  but thank you all for reading the romantic version...I have been trying to write "nice" for a change. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I love the rhythm in this write and for me ... there is enough to make the daisies smile .... and blush in pleasure. Very nice. Love, Margherita |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Between the lines a prospector Finds dreams of love so deep. But heartsickness is hidden too; This was not written without weep. This is lovely to read. Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
smiling at you... "When the power of love overcomes the love |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Karen, though many memories fade...some never do. You expressed this so very beautifully. .....jo |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
"Once upon a time we did... we made the daisies smile." You still do this. A great write! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I believe the daisies smiled wider than they ever have before..I know I DID! Gawd K, this is soulful beauty...of love that screams...unconditional....  YOU m'dear, have incredible talent! AND a beautiful heart! The greatest beauty on earth, is |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
I opened self to you in my glories petal pink blushing corals only you could write this grins ..awed |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
heh heh? thank you all |
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