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Open Poetry #33

Sharp Edged

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2004-09-17 07:35 PM

Sharp Edged

shattered dreams
lay silently on the floor
I pick one up
to examine the rainbows
it possessed
turning it over and over
in my hand
to see all the sides
where broken hopes
find themselves
in my fingers
sharp edged dead

just some words cut out
from the diary of my heart

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2004-09-17 07:43 PM

I'm partial to prisms, as they're always turning and reflecting the light,
sometimes that's all there is when the rainbow disappears.

Sadly, this~

Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

2 posted 2004-09-18 10:28 AM

Yes, I like this.
And thanks for an idea.

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Daniel Storm
Member

since 2004-09-08

Posts 91
New York

3 posted 2004-09-19 08:49 AM

good metaphor, sometimes cut glass is too beautiful to not pick up.

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