---White Lies Will Haunt You---

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Open Poetry #33

---White Lies Will Haunt You---

Darker Season
Junior Member

since 2004-04-01

Posts 48
Wisconsin

0 posted 2004-09-16 02:47 PM

History repeats itself
Look at you, you're someone else
It's nice to know I've got a friend like you...
Always standing by my side
Telling me you've never lied
When we both know those words are never true

Cuz everything you hide beneath
Comes crawling out between your teeth
Marching on the bridges that you've burned
Lighting up your true intent
Showing me you always meant
To kill the truth...but now it has returned

And I'm so irritated
And frustrated
By this mess you have created

Tell me...
Was the truth too heavy for your tongue to hold?
If so...
I hope you're haunted by the white lies that you've told

White lies will haunt you
White lies will haunt you

[This message has been edited by Darker Season (09-16-2004 07:11 PM).]

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2004-09-16 03:00 PM

WOW!! Excellent Andrew!
Love the way you tell it like it is!
A keeper m'friend.
Hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

2 posted 2004-09-16 04:12 PM

Had a few reads of it

Like it but I keep looking for bits in the middle.

Talent is there but it doesn't burst out

dave

PoeTik JusTice
Member

since 2003-01-05

Posts 186
California, USA

3 posted 2004-09-16 04:16 PM

great write! very well written! Keep it up!

XoXo Love Alwayz XoXo
*~Serena~*
"The greatest thing you'll ever learn, is just to love, and be loved in return." --Moulin Rouge

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