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Majick Midnight
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Rustling touched a bent blade of an idea whistling over ground to caress wildness and vision Sky fast flowing black blue moving wind of a picture in dark night's dream Friendship light bantering determined words of use Nights of talk never repeated never majicked but there for a moment Lies, use, sensual dreams destroyed by dreams Movement flowing forgotten unknowing challenge to harden desire An evening of wishing that was never there to an evening of planning that was there to a day that forgot A world of time that took minutes to decorate years for their own seconds Of Majick Midnight |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Dave, The thing I like best about your writing is that it is indefinitive. It sends me imagery, but leaves enough space for me to interpret it in several different ways. Majick Midnight... at first I looked up the word majick in the dictionary thinking it might be an English colloquialism then realized your intention! You are a clever one. miscellanea |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
and people tell me I'm deep??? This was truly awesome!!! A wicca spell? |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Most enjoyable read Dave. Expertly penned. Hugs~ ~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
miscellanea I love it that you read it, that you liked it. Dave LeeJ and people tell me I'm deep??? This was truly awesome!!! A wicca spell? Magic tells you, majick would never dream of telling you. dave Enchantress Member Empyrean Most enjoyable read Dave. Expertly penned. Hugs~ ~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~ Thanks for your words. Smiles but it is not of Autumn it is of endeavour, drive, thoughts, relationships, love in certain aspects as relationships have a degree of love and feeling. Dave The freedom of vision is my vison of Majick |
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