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Open Poetry #33

the taste of you

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

0 posted 2004-09-15 05:33 PM

The taste of you today
   is bittersweet

as this heart does skip a beat
over the lines of you

salty tears filled with fears

sensing
that some day
     the balloon might burst
no matter the amount
of fresh air it had been given

and the remains of the moment
are falling

somewhere
     in space and time

a continuum of soul

you will always breathe in rhythm

synchronicity

and the sigh of passion
shall stay captured within

the softest click of you
in blue.

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2004-09-15 05:36 PM

Midnitesun
I like it, I like it.

sim0riah
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since 2004-09-07

Posts 253
Wyoming USA

2 posted 2004-09-15 06:17 PM

Very Nice I especially like these 2 lines

and the sigh of passion
shall stay captured within

sim0riah

Only at night you can see the depth of the sun

Sim0riah

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2004-09-15 06:19 PM

wonderfully done, Kacy

*s
M

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

4 posted 2004-09-15 06:22 PM

thank you, Sy, Sim, Maureen

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