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sim0riah
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0 posted 2004-09-10 01:17 PM


How soft are the tears
From ones beautiful eyes
When thinking of loved ones
We've lost through our lives

How vivid the memories
of our sweet ones moved on
As if it were yesterday
or the day before they'd gone

How heavy the heart
Still pounds in despair
Missing the feeling
One's touch no longer there

How soft are the tears
From ones beautiful eyes
When thinking of loved ones
We've lost through our lives

sim0riah



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1 posted 2004-09-10 01:26 PM


This is heart rendering and so very touching.  Beautiful writing.
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2 posted 2004-09-10 01:33 PM


Sad yet so beautifully written.
Thank you for sharing.
Hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

sim0riah
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3 posted 2004-09-10 01:48 PM


Thanks you two for looking..I don't know why but sometimes I just get in these moods

sim0riah

Only at night you can see the depth of the sun

Sim0riah

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4 posted 2004-09-10 03:32 PM


This one made me all teary-eyed.  Too many memories and too many losses.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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5 posted 2004-09-10 05:16 PM


I am glad you had this mood...sometimes it is good to be sad so we can appreciate the happy even more...

Great empathy~A good character trait to have...

~Love and hugs
~ARH

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6 posted 2004-09-11 07:42 PM


gawd beautiful
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7 posted 2004-09-11 07:52 PM


such a heartfelt write....

I don’t want the world to see me
cause I don’t think that they’d understand
When everything’s made to be broken I just want you to know who I am

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8 posted 2004-09-14 07:23 PM


a very beautiful write
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9 posted 2004-09-15 12:55 PM


Lovely...James
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10 posted 2004-09-15 01:37 AM


this hit close to home.... thanks for the read though

and then He created the horse...

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11 posted 2004-09-15 04:58 PM


What a beautiful write! I like this very much! *S*
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12 posted 2004-09-15 06:02 PM


Richard~
I would answer that the tears are VERY soft~
Poignantly touching~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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13 posted 2004-09-15 06:24 PM


*sigh* softer than the kiss of morning mist  
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