Open Poetry #33 |
How Soft are the Tears |
sim0riah Member
since 2004-09-07
Posts 253Wyoming USA |
How soft are the tears From ones beautiful eyes When thinking of loved ones We've lost through our lives How vivid the memories of our sweet ones moved on As if it were yesterday or the day before they'd gone How heavy the heart Still pounds in despair Missing the feeling One's touch no longer there How soft are the tears From ones beautiful eyes When thinking of loved ones We've lost through our lives sim0riah |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
This is heart rendering and so very touching. Beautiful writing. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sad yet so beautifully written. Thank you for sharing. Hugs~ ~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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sim0riah Member
since 2004-09-07
Posts 253Wyoming USA |
Thanks you two for looking..I don't know why but sometimes I just get in these moods sim0riah Only at night you can see the depth of the sun |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
This one made me all teary-eyed. Too many memories and too many losses. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
I am glad you had this mood...sometimes it is good to be sad so we can appreciate the happy even more... Great empathy~A good character trait to have... ~Love and hugs ~ARH Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
gawd beautiful |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
such a heartfelt write.... I don’t want the world to see me |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
a very beautiful write |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely...James |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
this hit close to home.... thanks for the read though and then He created the horse... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
What a beautiful write! I like this very much! *S* |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Richard~ I would answer that the tears are VERY soft~ Poignantly touching~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
*sigh* softer than the kiss of morning mist |
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