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littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

0 posted 2004-09-15 01:59 PM

Oh, to reside
in eternal euphoric bliss
of a lover's satiated embrace . . .

What beauty
to always feel secure.
To be loved.
To be warm.

To hunger,
for that which you already possess.

To be alive,
yet in a constant state
of rusted passion.

And never having to think,
of a synapse

or two

that skipped a beat.

----------------------------------------------

(Special thanks to green itchy stuff,
(Craig) for letting me use rusted passion,
it is his.)

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

1 posted 2004-09-15 02:02 PM

Like it

Dave

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2004-09-15 02:04 PM

littlewing
Enjoyed the read.

Startime55
Member Elite

since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

3 posted 2004-09-15 02:04 PM

Ahhh yes you say it with desire in your words...very well done...

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

4 posted 2004-09-15 02:05 PM

and this is you, the gem of words...delightful is your heart and soul
you are poetry knocking on the door waiting to get out...to tell the world of pretty things...

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

5 posted 2004-09-15 02:08 PM

Oh, to reside
in eternal euphoric bliss
of a lover's satiated embrace . . .

What beauty
to always feel secure.
To be loved.
To be warm.

Yes, Sue to have those things would be so very wonderful. Well done gal...

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2004-09-15 02:25 PM

wonderful to read you again...missed you much

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

7 posted 2004-09-15 02:53 PM

Missed you, LW, good to read your words again.

~tier

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2004-09-15 04:30 PM

Wonderful write Sue!!
What a beautiful feeling it leaves me with. much enjoyed.
Hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

9 posted 2004-09-15 04:32 PM

Hi Sue

Missed you.

And I loved this.

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

10 posted 2004-09-15 11:24 PM

And never having to think,
of a synapse

or two

that skipped a beat.

DO YOU PROMISE??

smiling here for you and yours

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

11 posted 2004-09-15 11:26 PM

Indeed!

A thing to treasure.

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

12 posted 2004-09-16 01:58 AM

Your work has always been beautiful. I really loved this part.

"And never having to think,
of a synapse

or two

that skipped a beat."

Very cool.
-GIS

He has made everything beautiful in its own time. -Ecclesiastes 3:11

mysticpoe
Senior Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

13 posted 2004-09-16 01:55 PM

lw, isn't a bit wierd how feelings are verything when you come right down to it. Like each of us are made up of 99%+ of water. Like the water within us, without feelings, we'd be nothing. But as in water, we hide our feelings well. Which can mask our real intentions, thus losing precious time. Great feelings and write here lw. Hold onto this passion you have now with faith.. and love will have no choice but to be the by-product. This special and so wonderfully easy THING we take and have with us always and forever... and thanks for responding to my last write here lw. Later.

wayne

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

14 posted 2004-09-16 03:02 PM

I found a peace inside this....such beauty in words....hugssss you....

Lauren~

I don’t want the world to see me
cause I don’t think that they’d understand
When everything’s made to be broken I just want you to know who I am

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

15 posted 2004-09-16 03:19 PM

a constant state, yes

loved this view

kayjay
Member Elite

since 2002-06-24

Posts 2015
Oregon

16 posted 2004-09-16 05:59 PM

"Rusted passion" is quite a phrase; it fits well with the quality of your write. Ken

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

Robert Frazier
Senior Member

since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

17 posted 2004-09-16 07:27 PM

"To be alive,
yet in a constant state
of rusted passion". . .

this is a fear the drives

you do connect!

Rf

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

18 posted 2004-09-17 12:41 PM

Oh yes, to reside there - I like this.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

19 posted 2004-09-17 03:14 AM

Sue,
This is super romantic. So I hate to trouble you but if you write a sequel will it be "Reflux"?

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

20 posted 2004-09-17 04:26 AM

This is deep inteligent writing ..thank you..

Goldenrose.

The supreme happiness in life is the conviction that we are loved. Victor Hugo.

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