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Open Poetry #33

...And It Was Kosh....

mrmojorisin5908
Member

since 2004-05-03

Posts 103
Colorado

0 posted 2004-09-17 03:51 AM

Far above...a high whistle
The screaming echos: they replaced time
With it comes the anti-sentiment of being
It comes crawling up in a high pitched scream
Window panes Shattering from the awful waves
Then comes a grateful cry of inticing agony...

Delectable in their youths of charisma
I the young shaman; is his name Karisma?!?
...Down the golden banks of steam we walked
Our converstaion drew to a steady talk
"Dreams are high but the cry is from...

THE NIGHT!"

...Figure it out because the dawn has come to replace time

Andrew A.
"While public funds evaporate in feasts of fraternity, a bell of rosy fire rings in the clouds."

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2004-09-17 12:43 PM

hmmm
Nightime for homeless in downtown Denver.
That's the image that I'm seeing here.
And it's also reminding me of a famous painting, I believe called 'The Scream.'

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2004-09-17 01:26 PM

I have visions of "Catch-22"....

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2004-09-17 01:26 PM

when human choice becomes the ultimate valuation, then mankind will no longer have essense and no longer believe in a God

Exceptional write, whatever the meaning?

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

4 posted 2004-09-17 02:22 PM

haunting...this scratches the heart

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

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