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gemjop
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since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

0 posted 2004-09-15 12:48 PM

Seeing her,
did nothing for child-adult transition.

And since
I have found
keeping friendly voices low
across the room

is the only way to drift tonight

tv's and lamps

do not keep
awake

haunted eyes

but hush them to close

and sleep.
I think

I know her name
and purpose

yet
is still not familiar
to shocked nerves
~ disbelieving eyes

or tingle-skin connections
she drives
into my room
from time to time.

She made me look

shifting her shadow across
a room of such energies

muted

shining along the white wash

I never investigate
I never investigate

but I found her

nonetheless.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2004-09-15 12:55 PM

this is touching

love the new pic

Startime55
Member Elite

since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

2 posted 2004-09-15 01:55 PM

Deeply felt...well put...

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

3 posted 2004-09-15 04:45 PM

ummm WOW! Most definitely one of your best Gemma.

And......

I Leerrrve the new pic, pretty ladee

Um....Buona Sera / good evening

P.s Im a berk too lol.

It's a

The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change.
~Stevie Nicks~

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2004-09-15 06:07 PM

Gemma~
This is just a hauntingly beautiful piece of writing~
It is truly wonderful to see your word grace again~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email noles1@totcon.com

aujussy wolf

Senior Member

since 2003-08-09

Posts 1215
Michigan

5 posted 2004-09-15 10:29 PM

or tingle-skin connections
she drives
into my room
from time to time.

love it gem
i am sure i don't understand
it all but the way it fits together
like pieces to a puzzle
nice write

~wolfy

gemjop
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since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

6 posted 2004-09-16 06:26 AM

Thanks for the lovely compliments! Very much appreciate you reading.

aujussy wolf, it's all about a paranormal experience I had a month ago. Simple as that, but confusing for readers I'm sure!

xxx

P.s - woah! that picture is really IN-YOUR-FACE! I don't think i took into consideration how close up it was! You can even see a big spot on my chin!

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

7 posted 2004-09-16 10:21 PM

I admit, I peeked to find this was about a paranormal experience you had. I leaves tingles! Enjoyed.
miscellanea

Susan
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since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

8 posted 2004-09-17 12:34 PM

Nicely written, nice mood set - enjoyed.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

9 posted 2004-09-17 08:41 AM

Have had such experiences ....

my parents farmhouse has a headless shadow of a passed relative that comes and goes as it pleases. usually slamming a door or two as it goes.

We try not to see but they do not want to be forgotten!

Haunting and beautiful .... you!

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

10 posted 2004-09-17 11:07 AM

Wonderful read as I to have had such experiences Gemma.
Love your new pic!
What spot?? Yer so pretty.
Hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

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