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Open Poetry #33

As It Turns to Go

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

0 posted 2004-09-15 12:33 PM

As It Turns to Go

late summer
sunshine and breezes

at least in here
they are breezes
or when one
is tucked up
next to a building

outside
it’s a wind
a true wind
singing the chimes
almost continually

odd,
though,
comforting,
even,
how the chimes
add a gentleness
to the air
as it wafts
in one door and
out the other

it’s a day
that begs one
to rest
to lay aside concerns
and bathe
in the peace
of the waning summer
as it gently kisses
“Good-bye,”
with fewer degrees
and oft-broken rays

©September 14, 2004

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2004-09-15 01:54 PM

it’s a day
that begs one
to rest
to lay aside concerns
and bathe
in the peace
of the waning summer
as it gently kisses
“Good-bye,”
with fewer degrees
and oft-broken rays

the kind of days I love~~

M

Startime55
Member Elite

since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

2 posted 2004-09-15 01:56 PM

Oh yes, indeed...I could feel it...what a wonderful feeling of contentment it brought...still I will miss summer...

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2004-09-15 02:02 PM

VAS,
A delight to read.

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