Open Poetry #33 |
Bliss |
Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+ Layers of thin veneer peel away as we lay bare our souls. Naked we lie in the dawning light of our new life together ~ open and vulnerable, yet confident in our abiding love for one another. Joy seeps from every pore of my being as I behold your godly form in the rays of the morning sun. Our spirited union transcends mundane, human existence ~ carrying us off into realms of heavenly bliss. +*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
nicely done and uplifting Linda. Your positiveness sheds your light upon us all. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
reading this is like witness wholeness wonderful read |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Exquisite Linda....love this keeper. Hugs~ ~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Yes. Bliss is a great title for this, as it is bliss to read! Thanks for this beauty! miscellanea |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Donna ~ I appreciate your appreciation of my poem! Thank you, Gentle Spirited One. Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Lee ~ Yes, that is it exactly! ~ a feeling of wholeness... Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Nancy ~ Gosh, I must be the Queen of editing poems on-line! I made a few more changes since you saved it! Go figure! At least the changes are easier to make than the ones I feel compelled to do with my watercolour paintings once they have already been matted and framed! Jeeesh! lol Loves 'n hugs, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Missy ~ Thank you! ~ May your days ~ and nights! ~ be filled with bliss and beauty! ~ Altho', knowing the physical pain that you have been experiencing, I suppose that it may be a while before the bliss part kicks in! Loving, healing hugs, EA |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I love the way you see things...maybe I can wear those glasses one day too |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
p s ~ I must admit that those "glasses" do fall off once in awhile. But the view is far more pleasant when I am wearing them! ~ so I try my best to keep them on! lol EA |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Yes, just reading this held a kiss of bliss - beautiful. Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful! Eric |
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soul drifter Senior Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 711Colorado |
Wow...if/when I ever get married, I gotta recite this for at the wedding, for my bride. Wonderful. "Poets are all who love, who feel great truths, and tell them; and the truth of truths is love." --Philip James Bailey |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
I'll never know heavenly bliss...and have experienced little or no bliss of any kind here on this earth....but liked the write gal... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Very nice Linda, and hugs above for Toerag... M |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
I sometimes feel like that, half of that maybe, laying on my bed watching clouds move across blue sky. Peaceful, I like. Missed your warmth, Lindy. XX |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Linda, it seems that someone 'completes you;' to steal a line from a famous movie whose title escapes my brain tonight. This is a splendid and gloriously loving piece of writing. Huggles sister, Marti |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Susan ~ One can never have too many of those bliss kisses! Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
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Eric EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
soul drifter ~ That was a highly complimentary reply! Thank you! Warm welcoming hugs, EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Toe ~ You make me want to stretch my wings all the way down south so I can give you some northern bliss. Sending you lots of lovin' hugs, EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Naked One ~ Thank you, M! ~ & I'll join you in giving some tender lovin' hugs to our deer ~ oops! I meant "dear" ~ Bama friend! Love & Light, EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
gem drop ~ I believe the more paceful moments that we have ~ the longer and better the quality of our lives will be! Peace & Love, Lindy |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Marti ~ Yeppers! ~ and you know who that "someone" is! Ain't love grand! Love you! Linda |
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