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LeeJ
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0 posted 2004-09-15 11:11 AM


From broken to whole
Stripping away façade
Heroes in baby saucers
With tools of room pleasers
Stillborn with a seal of spirit
Totality of promise
To the end
Owning turns
In bondage
Down
Down
Down
Meekness refers contrary
Before mourners
Blessed thirst
Tugging the ache
Aggressively drinking
Bringing one day closer

Warmth of arms
Intense craving
Higher truths
I need not be seen
Giving flowers to the grave
Ambition to forgive
Need for attention left me
Wholeness awakens vivid

I have everything I need
Mind, body
Spirit unity
Resting in love
Content in knowledge
Even eyes green
Warm hearted willing
Smiles afraid
Bleaching the hair of humanity
Sorting jars by the door
Full jars
Giving the non-person matter
Love training
sigh.....


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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2004-09-15 01:22 PM


Interesting, as I read this, I get
the unique feeling that I'm looking
into a teacup and reading the left behind
leaves of its brew...

Hmmmm

Will have to come back and take this in again tonight...

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
2 posted 2004-09-15 01:28 PM


LeeJ
" I have everything I need
Mind, body
Spirit unity
Resting in love
Content in knowledge
Even eyes green
Warm hearted willing
Smiles afraid
Bleaching the hair of humanity
Sorting jars by the door
Full jars
Giving the non-person matter
Love training
sigh....."
Could it ever be said nicer than that?

Startime55
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since 2003-04-05
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Alberta, Canada
3 posted 2004-09-15 01:49 PM


AHHHH...contentment fills your words and what can be better than the contentment that comes with love...simply beautiful...

DavePage
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4 posted 2004-09-15 01:54 PM


Lee

I love your words

Dave


Within small egos
lacking any commitment to
anything or anyone
promising nothing but their own limitations on their prowness prowling on the weak
lying down for the strong with legs in the air
for to breath the air of another day on which they sit
contented in ignorance
that they are beyond
time immortal
of learning
anything

Dave


LeeJ
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5 posted 2004-09-15 02:00 PM


Startime55...if you knew where I came from, you'd probably be surprised at the contentment and peace...which I would never again compromise...oh, it is a work in progress and yes, there are lonely times, but fewer then more...thank you


Sunshine...you are a gem, and I believe as we converse more and more, we have some things in common...tea leaves and perception...smiles and hugs, thank you

David....I am left speechless, that was absolutely beautiful...God bless you!

May everyone who is presently facing the coming of Ivan, be safe, material things can be replaced, lives cannot...please takecarea you and yours.

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

6 posted 2004-09-15 02:06 PM


Sy, oh, yes, absolutely, and you always do it sooooo much better...thank you kiddo, have a great day, don't forget about us in the morning...K?  hugs, me
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