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Tracing Circle's Past
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Tracing Circle's Past |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
No room for tiers here and silence, though unnerving can amount to a blessing My R's and T's and Rainey days are long gone As are M's DeVaux and E G's, and Artsie girls. even Jupiter himself knows that only papa's little circle could create the delicate warmth called home So, this candle lit for the many butterflies that flit- mocking simon, and jeanie of dreams, to Billodeaux and chantille in lace for Teresa and Bobby in all of their grace And A.J. Keating, and his many sonnets and songs and dear Kellie, more than just a woman all day long I'm here to admit all are deeply missed no there's no room for tiers here only memories of who... ~tier |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
and silence, though unnerving can amount to a blessing Indeed it can Tier. Very well done and a pleasure to read you again. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this was a plesant read, written well, and yeah, no more tears! I like that thought even Jupiter himself knows that only papa's little circle could create the delicate warmth called home this was the delivery which captured me...lovely Now, tell me, who is papa... I know, I know, and love the thought...great write, very enjoyable Thanks a bunch |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Tier, you take from the best, and multiply it with love... happy belated birthday, little girl... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Tiersdin The brine of time Is placed in rhyme. Well done. |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Indeed! |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
How beautifully you weave your spell around us....Your words touch the heart... |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Thanks everyone, for the kind and thoughtful comments. And Sunshine, it was just another to be thankful for life... *hugs to all* ~tier  |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Yikes! This is better than good. And this is wonderful "even Jupiter himself knows that only papa's little circle could create the delicate warmth called home" |
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