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Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17
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east coast

0 posted 2004-09-15 08:04 AM



No room for tiers here

and silence, though
unnerving can amount
to a blessing

My R's and T's
and Rainey days
are long gone

As are M's DeVaux
and E G's, and Artsie
girls.

even Jupiter himself
knows that only papa's
little circle could create
the delicate warmth called
home

So, this candle lit for
the many butterflies that
flit-

mocking simon, and jeanie
of dreams, to Billodeaux
and chantille in lace for
Teresa and Bobby in all
of their grace

And A.J. Keating, and his
many sonnets and songs and
dear Kellie, more than just
a woman all day long
I'm here to admit
all are deeply missed

no
there's no room for tiers here

only memories of who...


~tier

© Copyright 2004 R.T. Webster-Mosby - All Rights Reserved
Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

1 posted 2004-09-15 08:47 AM


and silence, though
unnerving can amount
to a blessing

Indeed it can Tier.  Very well done and a pleasure to read you again.

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

2 posted 2004-09-15 08:48 AM


this was a plesant read, written well, and yeah, no more tears!  I like that thought

even Jupiter himself
knows that only papa's
little circle could create
the delicate warmth called
home

this was the delivery which captured me...lovely
Now, tell me, who is papa...
I know, I know, and love the thought...great write, very enjoyable
Thanks a bunch

Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
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Listening to every heart
3 posted 2004-09-15 09:07 AM


Tier, you take from the best,
and multiply it with love...

happy belated birthday, little girl...

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
4 posted 2004-09-15 09:08 AM


Tiersdin
The brine of time
Is placed in rhyme.
Well done.

RMW
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since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424

5 posted 2004-09-15 01:36 PM


Indeed!
Startime55
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since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada
6 posted 2004-09-15 01:48 PM


How beautifully you weave your spell around us....Your words touch the heart...

Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364
east coast
7 posted 2004-09-15 02:02 PM


Thanks everyone, for the kind and thoughtful comments.  And Sunshine, it was just another to be thankful for life...

*hugs to all*

~tier

wranx
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since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn
8 posted 2004-09-15 11:31 PM


Yikes! This is better than good.

And this is wonderful

"even Jupiter himself
knows that only papa's
little circle could create
the delicate warmth called
home"

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