Open Poetry #33 |
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Crazy Jim-Bob's Saloon (duet with Bill Charles) |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989![]() |
CRAZY JIM-BOB’S SALOON by Bill & Donna ~~~~ It was a plain old saloon in the back hills of West Virginia with a dance floor cozy and a three piece band playing the blues kind of soft and sexy filtering through the place, and as I stood at the bar eyes met and whispered to each other without words… I mentioned dance and you nodded your head that said yes and when we came together on the dance floor I held your hand in mine, your waist touched softly with the other and the music felt as if it were coming from inside… The rhythm joined us as one, your fragrance mesmerizing, your hair smelling of sweetness soft to my touch, hips swayed together warm as the summer night, and we danced again, once again as before… Crazy Jim-Bob’s Saloon, it was that kind of place, ~~~~ Lights were dimmed down on low almost as though we were dancing in candlelight, setting the perfect mood… We swayed gently to and fro as you held me tenderly, arms wrapped around holding me tight as the moment gave in to a feeling oh so right… I laid my head on your shoulder not wanting the music to end and somehow by sheer luck the band began playing soft and sexy again… Crazy Jim-Bob’s Saloon, it’s that kind of place, … ~~~~ 9/14/2004 It's better than I could have planned.. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent duet from two of Passions finest! And, good to read you again BC!!! Hope to see more from the two of you! ~Hugs to you both~ ~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Enjoyed the soft, sultry atmosphere and wish I were dancing on the floor of Crazy Jim-Bob's Salloon with a warm honey ![]() susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh, puhleeze, bring back country-western, Jim Bob's, and "that kind of place..." I loved it! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Nancy, Susan, Kari, thank you. It was a pleasure to write with Bill again and possibly a follow up to this might happen when time allows. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Donna - thank you for writing this with me. I know I've not been around for a while, but the two businesses are taking up most of my time. I'd love to do more writing, perhaps soon. Thanks again, it was great doing this one. BC |
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