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Midnitesun
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0 posted 2004-09-15 07:03 PM



Staring at words
wishing them away
         from reality.

Fantasy takes the edge
off of the chill of mourning
          but does not
heat up the day
when it unwinds itself so far.

To sit and wait for the warm touch
nearly breaks the too-tempered heart.


Want is not enough.

Heed the rush of the wind
as it spins tales of what-ifs
and what could-have-beens

knowing all too well

‘twas but fantasy
perceived as reality.

But, oh

it felt so good
and I never wanted
it to end

yet
at some point on the circle

it all re-connects,

and the sense of it remains
sheltered within

even as the view
feels itself on the outside

seeking the softness

of within.


© Copyright 2004 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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1 posted 2004-09-15 07:05 PM


Enjoyed...James
mrmojorisin5908
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2 posted 2004-09-15 07:15 PM


Very nicely written. We want what we need but we need what we want.
-andrew

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3 posted 2004-09-15 07:53 PM


Sounds like the most safety lies within us.  I think that is true.  Good job!! Ken

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

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4 posted 2004-09-15 08:05 PM


James, Mojo, thank you!
Yes, Ken, 'the safety zone' tends to be within. Sometimes I spend too much time in that end zone. LOL

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5 posted 2004-09-15 09:35 PM


Excellent write Kacy...very much enjoyed.
Hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

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6 posted 2004-09-15 09:48 PM


yet
at some point on the circle

it all re-connects,

~*~

The wonder of this is its title...
for without a little fantasy,
with reality biting us as it does,
we would all lay bleeding,
nothing more than humanoids...

sometimes, I think it is fantasy,
that allows us
art.

Kacy?  I watch the lines you walk,
always so very glad in my heart
that you take many paths.

Such a gypsywoman...
and one I admire very much.

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7 posted 2004-09-15 10:15 PM


Thank you, dear Nancy!

Karilea, what a heart-hug of a reply. It's so true, fantasy can be a refuge in the storm, a safe way to handle emotional short-circuits and overloads. THANK YOU, for being here.

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8 posted 2004-09-16 05:38 PM


I know these feelings...well done.. E S West

"always be true to SELF, and follow your heart.."
" Ignorance is the root of all evil "

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9 posted 2004-09-16 07:04 PM


ES, guess we all have our moments when we live more in fantasy than reality, for whatever reason. Thanks for stopping.
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