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Open Poetry #33
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James_A_Fraser
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Out Making Anticlines
0 posted 2004-09-15 07:02 PM

Listening


I listen to
the sound
of your
absence

tuned

to sweetness
by the knowing

in this moment
you listen
to mine

and

sing me
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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2004-09-15 07:52 PM

So you've been reading Ericc...


And you did a fine job with very few words, sir.

Thank you for this lovely.
Martie
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2 posted 2004-09-15 09:42 PM

Jamie

Sounds like harmony to me.  
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3 posted 2004-09-16 08:37 AM

Lucky is the one whose absence is felt this keenly... and tenderly. Beautiful work!
LeeJ
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4 posted 2004-09-16 09:06 AM

sigh..beautiful
E S West
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5 posted 2004-09-16 05:36 PM

simply beautifully stated... E S West

"always be true to SELF, and follow your heart.."
" Ignorance is the root of all evil "
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