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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Lack Of When words no longer matter and the time is ever short When the hint of things to come is lost among those needs, support When a whispered thought or two could count and make you be my ten It is then I've lost the time and beat repeating, once again "My opinions make no inroads My decisions lacking more Hard to counteract the feelings That make trying such a chore" Though my needs are less, they're needed more Yet never on your mind It is time that holds the essence of tomorrow's want in find. A poet not, though tried to be connections meaning~full a link between surrounding of conveyance in its pull When time no longer matters and the words are ever short When the needs of things to come is lost and hints get no retort When a thought or two or actions of could count above the ten It is then and now, tomorrow's loss from lack of feel again. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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sim0riah Member
since 2004-09-07
Posts 253Wyoming USA |
Although it is sad, I really enjoy reading your stuff..I can go through the same mind set as you at times..Glad your picture has a smile in it sim0riah Only at night you can see the depth of the sun |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Well written, I especially liked this - When the needs of things to come is lost and hints get no retort Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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