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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
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Without stone and undelivered bridges it cannot be saved for longer than it will echo unaided although you shaped me you do not define me. There will be no time-slip rumble of your name to be found by walkers in the field when we no longer tread water here. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Such a quiet proclamation, the tone is so level and even-keeled, it read to me as a simple, statement of fact that should be taken as warning of resolute intent. It's wonderful to read you again, gemma. Enjoyed this greatly. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
God, I have missed you Gem . . . although you shaped me you do not define me. yes! and you have always stood on your own, anyhow |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
quote:  talk about a great line!good to read you again gemmagal |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WOW!! Fantastic write.. so good to read you again! Hugs~ ~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
such strenght in the sublety here and good to see the likes of you, dear poet here again |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Without stone and undelivered bridges it cannot be saved for longer than it will echo unaided Love that lead in!! Gosh gemma, you're so good!! Take your bows, woman!!!  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
dang...missed you! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
So now....I think it is YOUR morning, so.. Buon Giorno! to you pretty ladee quote: Yup.. what Karen said.... great to read you Gemma. It's a  Maree  The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
great poem and so wonderful you are back |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Excellent!!!!! This was a joy to read and have missed you |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
There you are, my darlin' little gem drop! Gosh, you've been missed! I could not even write my own feelings about this poem as well as Serenity just did in her reply! What she has so aptly stated, goes for me as well!  Loves 'n hugs, LL |
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Alicia Member
since 2002-03-22
Posts 279 |
~so good. and so glad i happened upon it. "without stone and undeliverd bridges",...what that there alone sets up in my mind. this seems so sure. the wording and tone are so precise. enjoyed. will watch for more from you. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Kiekegaard said that "once you label me, you negate me." Your words are beyond description. Eric |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
"although you shaped me you do not define me." Yes! Now if only THEY (by they I mean the guys that cause the hurt that writes these poems) would realise this. *hugs* and then He created the horse... |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Thankyou, thankyou thankyou for your warm welcome back, you never fail to welcome me, no matter how many times I go missing! I always miss you, so it's good to be back. Karen, yes, you hit the nail on the head. I felt no anger writing this, in my head it even felt quiet and calm, despite how much I mean it. It felt like a whisper! |
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