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Justbleu
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Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

0 posted 2004-09-15 11:51 AM


Fall upon me
And drink my soul in
Listen and you will know my heart
Glance at the softness of my beat
Lift the layers and you will understand
That in which lies just beneath the folds
You will know my truth
You will know what I thirst for
My vulnerabilities talking deeply
In a depth of swirling subtlety
The weakness which kills my insides

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." A. Brink


© Copyright 2004 Bridgette C. Morgan Schroeder - All Rights Reserved
Startime55
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since 2003-04-05
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Alberta, Canada
1 posted 2004-09-15 12:06 PM


Much of the inner you is woven in these words that flow from your heart...well done...

VAS
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since 2000-11-16
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Oregon
2 posted 2004-09-15 12:48 PM


quite an invitation to become fully exposed to that special someone

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
3 posted 2004-09-15 01:00 PM


Look at what this warm summer breeze JUST BLEW in! Good to see your smiling face and read your lovely words again!

Your thoughts and feelings were softly and subtly expressed. A beautiful expose of a sensitive and beautiful heart.

Warm hugs,
EA

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
4 posted 2004-09-15 01:18 PM


Justbleu
Lovely just lovely.

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