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Open Poetry #33
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MERCURY
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since 2003-04-16
Posts 190
Ireland
0 posted 2004-09-14 09:55 AM

I could save your soul,
If you just give me a chance,
I would love you whole,
Just give me a chance.

Temperatures rise,
No more sad goodbyes,
I’ll tell you no lies,
No more teary goodbyes.

I will love you till the end of time
Where there is no longer any grains of sand
I will love you in the shadowy afterlife
Ignoring where our souls land.
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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
1 posted 2004-09-14 11:18 AM

oh this was so nice to read, comfort and joy come to mind
miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060
OH
2 posted 2004-09-14 11:33 AM

Lee is right.  This is sweet, comforting, and a pleasure to read.  I bet whoever inspired you to write this likes this...
Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
3 posted 2004-09-14 11:35 AM

beautiful
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