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Open Poetry #33

Interlude With Fancy

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

0 posted 2004-09-14 09:48 AM

Seat of feeling
Gives arms to diplomas
Doorway of man’s intellect
Leaves soil to feed
Within a soft chair of knowledge
Surviving vehicle
Leader, inspiration
6 lane highways
Passionate affections
Toward confessionals
Holy water braving death
Reviving
Subduing
Significance
Pouring cool water
Freshness
Quickening courage
Formations of multiples
Ringing bells
Of ardor, kissing lips
Emotional entity
I am motivated into a moral subject
Soul filled music
Has twice written me
Lost my inheritance
But then…everything is worth love?
Isn’t it?I’d give up my Elvis collection
My picture of Sam Elliott
A pass to Curves
For one free visit

Bloody heart bleeding
To the war eagles
Laughing black ravines
beckon
deceive
lingering
my knees bend
into pale women
with broad shields
like knee pads
with eye transplants
stealing to third base
kissing the mouth of freedom
supports the parents
of Make Believe

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2004-09-14 09:57 AM

That was quite the ride you just took me on through your vividly active mind's eye! You sure do have a lot going on in your pretty head! lol

Yours is a mind that never rests! ~ and that is a good thing for your readers! lol

Have a marvellous day!

Linda

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

2 posted 2004-09-14 11:50 AM

Why is it Lee that you bring out the devil in me and I start to look at your writing in depth.

dave

Situation Vacant

Sought an inspired fast moving religious influence
chastity not required for love
fighting for the ravages of true joy and laughter
requires an honest man with a chest I like
to dream of
please apply to dreams on winds of?!

Dave

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2004-09-14 12:45 PM

Sam Elliott is one good lookin' man!

loved the ending of this write here...you do well at endings

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

4 posted 2004-09-14 02:26 PM

Wonderful write!

Eric

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