Open Poetry #33 |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Running shredding dancing away water free cotton cloth for the rain Swhising along eyes looking back cotton moving Eyes black eyelids open Some words are deliberately mispelled - I leave yo7u to identify the image from the words from? Dave |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Dave, I'm glad to see the misspelling! I find it can be a very powerful tool. I've used it a lot, "mostly" intentionally! I like the impressionalistic quality you've painted. miscellanea |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
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I remember at a kid trying to draw in charcoal the dancers and I couldn't. Maybe in words I can draw an image that my hands lack the skill for. thanks dave |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent imagery here Dave... Much enjoy your work. Hugs~ ~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
I think so, Dave. miscellanea |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Words to understand life Thanks dave |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
I agree with the others on this one. :-) |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
well, when I was a kid, when we had spelling bees, I was the first to sit down...that can be darn embarrasing...so you've hit a soft spot...smiles I agree with everyone else here, well done |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
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Thanks Dave |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good to see you back here I guess you got your program fixed? I remember you were having some trouble before. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, you're such a tease! ~ and a playful one at that! ![]() I liked this! Sort of an abstract painting with werds! lol Love & Life! EA |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Hmmm...I see opera/ballet/dance...interpretative style... but I don't do well with guessing games, and I was never the last one to sit down at a spelling bee...LOL... more clues in poetic form, please? |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
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and, oh, in case you never go to Announcements? Go to Announcements. ![]() |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
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I will go to announcements. I thought I was being good. Dave |
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