tree shoe golly - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Open Poetry #33

tree shoe golly

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2004-09-14 07:59 AM

tennis shoe trees
leaf strings
tied in knots
by wind kids hands

talked to god again
he said he could fix em
with some time
maybe a winter or two

lady next door laughed
said she could do it better
with a chainsaw wrench
and a fire place tool

I said god didn't need help
she said all men did
and killed her roses
with a bug be gone gun

and some second hand water
________
Dark

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2004-09-14 08:06 AM

Fabulous write...whatever we encounter, patience, endurance, is finding hope & answers in a barren land...not looking for acceptance in others, but trusting self...this speaks the power of love in affirmation...through a season of self-discovery...well-watered valley of fertile soils...tremendous write and one of my favs of yours...thank you for writing and sharing...Good good morning and happy Tuesday!

[This message has been edited by LeeJ (09-14-2004 11:36 AM).]

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2004-09-14 08:26 AM

Dark,
Enjoyed the write.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2004-09-14 09:13 AM

Sounds like a crochety old woman
who has given up on the world
because she lives on a street
with teenaged boys...

well done, Sir...

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

4 posted 2004-09-14 09:32 AM

I said god didn't need help
she said all men did

well now, I just have to say I love these lines the most. good morning.

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

5 posted 2004-09-14 10:02 AM

This is great D- put a smile on my face, as often happen

You know I do love your word weaving, spell casting talent.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2004-09-14 12:48 PM

you know I'll never stop reading

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.