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Verve Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 348Singapore |
The clock chimes... a familiar unfeeling rhythm. Withered sighs upon the hour, as heavy smoke plumes dance in tune. The dimmed lamp above slowly glares, as windy dusk returns to night. An awkward silence descends and sink, Hush now... Listen to its reasonating doubt. Humming swirls of burnt out ashes, fills the air with a poignant staleness. Unfallen tears blind to another's stare, This conversation is simply going nowhere. "Who knows what evil lurks in the heart of Man?" |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Oh Regina, this one breathes of hurt....but is written so very well. Oh, so poignant. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The empty this leaves fills the room. Well done! |
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Kazm Member
since 2003-11-13
Posts 99 |
Resonating doubt, poignant staleness. You make me see emotions and feel them too. Kaz |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
damn this is so good |
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Verve Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 348Singapore |
Dear all, Many heartfelt thanks for all your comments... really made my day  "Who knows what evil lurks in the heart of Man?" |
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Daniel Storm Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 91New York |
Effective write. Makes me want to get some fresh air (smile) |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
understanding this too well |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Yep, there's better things to do than watch the clock, and try to figure out where the nearest door is. You created the mood as well as the doldrums. Much enjoyed, Verve~ |
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