Open Poetry #33 |
Turn Around |
Kazm Member
since 2003-11-13
Posts 99 |
Turn Around Turn around, turn around! Somehow you don't find me as I wait, invisible to you, longing to be seen. Turn around, turn around! You've gone so far already and each step carries you farther farther, far... Turn around, hear me call! I can feel you fading, searching for one who loves, finding only dreams.... Turn around, turn around! maybe I'm already yours and you will never know you've passed love by. Turn around, see my tears! It's not too late for us; our dreams may be the same, I may be the one. For my Lady Of The East, in thankfulness forever that she did turn. Kaz |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Your lady is a lucky one, my friend... for this heart-cry is incredibly beautiful! *S* You build the tension so perfectly the reader can't help but whisper with you... I'm so glad your words were heard. *S* |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
So glad she did turn around and opened her eyes~ that Lady of the east... I could relate to this one as though you were reading my thoughts. ~Love and hugs ~ARH Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely! |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Kaz and Pandonov back on the same day....I can die happy! Good to see you around here, bud. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Enjoyed- Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
precious |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
So it wasn't a dream after all? Good for you! Gotta love those happy endings. Nicely done, Kazm~ |
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