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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2004-09-14 06:10 AM



Too

I know I am not worth all the trouble.
Been told so before, just haven't
learned to accept it yet.

But there was a time when
trouble wasn't part of me
and everything that was during and followed
was true in happiness,
or maybe it was all my imagination.

I am not that easy,
although easy to get along with
strangers, but
when it comes to closeness
I have forgotten what it feels like.


It's been too long
and maybe it is the too
that speaks loudest to me
and builds those protective walls
that keep the hurt out and the cold in
and the indecision of each day
on its edges.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

© Copyright 2004 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
Goldenrose
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1 posted 2004-09-14 06:41 AM


This is a little sad M...but i feel there is hope and optimism too..thank you..

Goldenrose.

The supreme happiness in life is the conviction that we are loved. Victor Hugo.

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
2 posted 2004-09-14 06:45 AM


Good morning Phil..hope you are well

and thank you for taking the time to read and respond.

hugs
M

sim0riah
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since 2004-09-07
Posts 253
Wyoming USA
3 posted 2004-09-14 09:52 AM


M

I know how you feel...Somedays I just get in a rut and its hard to get out of..However, Once in awhile, Right in the middle of an ordinary life, Love gives us a fairy tale.

sim0riah

Only at night you can see the depth of the sun

Sim0riah

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
4 posted 2004-09-14 11:13 AM


M, first let me say you have a lot to look forward to.
Such a lovely smile...so much love to give.
Then may I add...I absolutely love sim0riah's response!
Hugs pretty lady~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
5 posted 2004-09-14 01:21 PM


let me tell you I understand

you know I know

Susan
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since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
6 posted 2004-09-14 02:58 PM


Do you know I've also been told I am "too much work" but then I've been told I'm worth it -
You are too.  

I was told that it is selfish people who do not wish to work in a relationship when they come upon complicated people, but then again, the complex makes life so much richer.  Hugs to you -

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082
of Depression
7 posted 2004-09-14 06:16 PM


Enjoyed the read
agree with the others, too

Gloom

sim0riah
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since 2004-09-07
Posts 253
Wyoming USA
8 posted 2004-09-15 11:41 AM


I know this is M's thread but I would like to say Thank you Enchantress for that nice comment.

sim0riah

Only at night you can see the depth of the sun

Sim0riah

Startime55
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since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada
9 posted 2004-09-15 12:09 PM


Never think you are not worth it...you are precious to so many who know it takes little to love the person you are....when the right person comes along the walls will melt away like new snow in the spring...**hugs**

KoKo
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since 2003-02-15
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Inside the shadow's shadow
10 posted 2004-09-16 07:12 AM


You just made me understand something about myself I've been wondering about for ages...Thank you.
LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

11 posted 2004-09-16 07:41 AM


trust me, when someone comes along who is capable of caring for your heart with responsible good intentions, you will automatically know...let the lessons carve a great opening in your heart, one of metamorphsis and peace...
Your a very precious poetess


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