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Sunset |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Sunset Gold hue reflecting Warm in her soft loving eyes Glowing as sun sets. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
A lovely haiku!! |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Thank you Kristabell. You are very kind. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Makes me think of a moment on sandy shores, looking into such beautiful eyes... Such peace...thanx Scorpio... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah dear Scorpio...I can almost see this glorious sunset, and your lady love looking so soft and pretty in the light of the setting sun. She is one very lucky woman... to have poems written for her like this. Well done Scorpio..good to read you again. ~Smiles, Hugs & Love, Tinker~ ~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
It certainly does Barry. And seeing the whole scene reflected in her eyes. believe in what your heart feels... |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Thank you Tinker. I knew you would enjoy the write. I believe you love sunsets. I'd like to share some with you. believe in what your heart feels... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beeeeeautiful |
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Margot Member
since 2003-10-04
Posts 154 |
Lovely Margot Love is something eternal, The aspect may change, But not the essence.- Vincent Van Gogh |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
marvelous happiness painted here thank you for sharing |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
 ~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This is a good time of year for gold hues... and you share very well, Scorpio. Thank you for allowing us to look through your eyes. |
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soul drifter Senior Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 711Colorado |
Hm, I was just wondering if anybody posted haikus around here. Very nice write! "Poets are all who love, who feel great truths, and tell them; and the truth of truths is love." --Philip James Bailey |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Thank you Passing Shadows. Much appreciated. Margot thanks for stopping in. Thank you for your comments Lee J. Very thoughful of you Tinker. Thanks for the bump!! Than you Karilea. I love the golden hue from sunsets. But there are some other spectacular colours present too. Thank you Soul Drifter for your support. And yes there are many in Pip who write much better haikus and senryus too. believe in what your heart feels... |
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