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Open Poetry #33

Yet Another Dream

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

0 posted 2004-09-12 05:40 PM

A Romantic

Slipping across my mind dancing your image
and a trail left behind
Mystics always tracing
roof sky clouds mouth
Dancing people on an edge you can’t find yourself
Eyes mischievous
body singing
a band saw on edge
Rhythm the flowers for the fallen
deep in drink
Who dances from the table
fast asleep
To swirl old map boards in clouds of ice steam
To the end
Of a cool cold evening
And yet another dream

Copperbell
Senior Member

since 2003-11-08

Posts 956

1 posted 2004-09-12 05:49 PM

very nice. smooth

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

2 posted 2004-09-12 06:03 PM

Thanks

Dave

Kristabell
Senior Member

since 2003-11-29

Posts 678
Portland, OR

3 posted 2004-09-12 10:13 PM

Dreams... who can say? Nice write!

Much love,
Kristabell

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

4 posted 2004-09-13 07:13 AM

amazing delivery, feeling much faith from this, filling currents of scenery

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

5 posted 2004-09-13 03:35 PM

Kristabell
Dreams... who can say? Nice write!

Love

Dave

LeeJ

I am honoured that you read these words.

Quality is yours - a mere searcher reports.

dave

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