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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2004-09-12 01:26 AM


To Be In Love


I was with my sweetheart last night,
I was kissing her and holding her tight
and I was thinking about this
thing that they call love.

Then I started singing her a little song,
and she started singing along...

"The moon is shining so bright,
it sure is a beautiful night,
and I'm so happy to be with
the one that I love."

As I held her nice and tight
we sang on into the night...

"There's no charge to look
at the moon and the stars above,
feels so good to be in the arms
of the one that I love, and it
doesn't cost a thing to be in love?"


JamesLee
September12
2004


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ShiningWindHaze
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1 posted 2004-09-12 03:36 AM


Sweet. A glimpse of my future slightly altered perhaps. I have yet to be in love but long to anyway. Scared for those who lie and those who use those who adore them.

- Haze

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2 posted 2004-09-12 03:48 AM


pure romantic
Evi
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3 posted 2004-09-12 04:45 AM


Lovely, so true


Evi
xxx

Ericc
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4 posted 2004-09-12 04:10 PM


Nice write James!

Eric

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5 posted 2004-09-13 12:49 PM


ah  soo nice  james


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6 posted 2004-09-13 11:08 AM


That must be a really sweet song!

To be in love with someone who loves you, is something that should not be taken for granted. It's as precious as a rainbow after the rain, and it's to be cherished with all our hearts.

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

Muys
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7 posted 2004-09-13 11:17 AM


James
I am so happy for you
You are a lucky dog
Hug
Muys

Startime55
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8 posted 2004-09-13 01:00 PM


Sweet romance wrapped in moonlight...Need I say I love it...Wonderfully romantic...

E S West
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9 posted 2004-09-13 06:29 PM


You lead me to memories of past love...

well done.... E S West

"always be true to SELF, and follow your heart.."
" Ignorance is the root of all evil "

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