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A Place Of Our Own
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A Place Of Our Own |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
I close my eyes and see our bridges burning, dragged from your arms taken to a land I have never known to be among my kinfolk. Another life has been thrust upon me Would that I could warm my spirits in the flames I left behind. Shrivelled in my loneliness I seek the sea, praying in my wild imaginings, for a a ferryman to row me over. The water covers my eyes as it does our bridges. and there you are arms wide open waiting to take me to a place of our own. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Maggie, this sounds like a dream... at least, it walked like a dream... Good to see your name again... |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
Thank you for commenting Sunshine. Maggie |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Maggie~ There is such a wistful longing in this piece~ Beautifully done~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
Marg e thank you for commenting. Hugs. Maggie |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"Shrivelled in my loneliness I seek the sea, praying in my wild imaginings, for a a ferryman to row me over." Enjoyed the write, though so sad......jo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice one |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
iliana and Shadow thank you so much. Maggie |
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