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A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2004-07-07 10:41 PM

What my eyes long to behold,
is the vision of you,
locked in my mind so bold,
a vison, of every color and hue,

What my lips long to kiss,
your lips devine,
a moment not to miss,
sweet as berries of the vine,

What my arms long to embrace,
your body, held tight,
our love coming face to face,
ebraced together, all night,

What my ears long to hear,
your words "I Love You",
whispered gently in my ear,
meaning every word to be true,

What my nose longs to smell,
is the smell of your skin,
sexy aroma enticing like a spell,
grabbing and pulling me in,

What my hands long to feel,
is your hands in mine,
grasping tightly, so real,
until there is no outline,

What my heart desires best,
is to beat upon your heart,
laying, breathing, chest to chest,
becoming one, never to depart.

Take me, I am Yours....forevermore!

"The best and most beautiful things in the world cannot be seen or even touched.They must be felt with the heart."~Helen Keller (1880-1968)

[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (07-08-2004 04:15 AM).]

Fagin
Member

since 2004-05-07

Posts 126
Ca

1 posted 2004-07-08 02:50 AM

This IS beautiful.. the only thing is:
"I need a reality check" seems out of TIME with everything else. I dont mean cadence, its just that when you start this, it seems like a love letter from long ago.
Very nice

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2004-07-08 03:56 AM

just beautiful, as usual

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

3 posted 2004-07-08 04:17 AM

I agree , I felt the same as I was writing it and now I have changed it....it tis better!

Thank you both!

Love and Hugs
~ARH

"The best and most beautiful things in the world cannot be seen or even touched.They must be felt with the heart."~Helen Keller (1880-1968)

CastleGuard
Senior Member

since 2003-04-30

Posts 760
Alberta, Canada

4 posted 2004-07-08 10:39 AM

One to be thus embraced...would be truly blessed.

A passionate write, ARH.

CG

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

5 posted 2004-07-09 12:03 PM

Thank you sir Castleguard, your compliments grace me....

~Love and Hugs
~ARH

"The best and most beautiful things in the world cannot be seen or even touched.They must be felt with the heart."~Helen Keller (1880-1968)

Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

6 posted 2004-07-10 08:09 AM

Passion of your heart is warm and soft...but strong and bold too...your heart is a primary concern...one i am happy to be within...this is deep and beautiful ..thank you..

Goldenrose.

Look for love and happiness...

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

7 posted 2004-07-10 04:04 PM

You do, most definitely have a romantic
heart... For you write romance very well.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2004-07-10 10:28 PM

This is the finest one...Love it...James

icebox
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since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

9 posted 2004-07-11 04:21 AM

"What my hands long to feel,
is your hands in mine,
grasping tightly, so real,
until there is no outline,"

To give yourself over that completely is to turn your throat to the wolf; if you are wrong it will not matter.

I wish you well.

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