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For Liz |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Inquisitive eyes, looking after perceptions Settled in front of every profound ocean Sensing an all heartwarming meaning of soul A woman’s time of blessings, in friendships they know Transfers willingness to convey a passionate compass Times of sadness, loyalty, owning a striking finesse She’s a sister of the heart, not needing explanations A celestial warrior open-minded, devoted and unselfish Knowing the consciousness of God, in broadening hours of day light Articulating a wealth of effects, in the things outside her world She polishes an obvious, in connection with spiritual possessions She’s a discerning life force with fragrant energy professed Like an internal voice re-grounding ideals, overcoming barriers She is that soft driven triumph, flowering human potential A testament to human purpose, brilliance of self-reliance & beauty Attention to detail gives her wisdom competent She wears a gown of harmony, enormous appreciation for melody Vibrant "narrator", sensitive yet, ready to accept any challenge Consistency lives in your veins, with a great passion for travel People, culture & a tendency to foster all of life Your sense of dignity and worth, values a special curve of the earth Reverie which sounds like church bells sounding a message Making someone’s day a little brighter with resolution PIP’s all inclusive significant woman… Liz, you’re the soft voice of beauty God sends in each human Your pronunciation for the word admiration In all who come to know you You are friendship beyond the reach of words So look out Susan Sarandon, here she comes! Smiles and hugs Liz, Thanks a bunch for Lunch! |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Beautiful words from a giving, loving and beautiful heart! A great tribute....she is blessed to have your friendship and both to have God... God Bless you both... ~Love and Hugs ~ARH  "The best and most beautiful things in the world cannot be seen or even touched.They must be felt with the heart."~Helen Keller (1880-1968) |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"She’s a discerning life force with fragrant energy professed" I find this to be very true of her poetry, and we all know, that poetry is a glimpse of the soul....so Lee, I think you have captured her essense well here. Beautiful and adoring penning....... Be well & hugs, jo |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
LeeJ Such pefect phrases for lovely liz...she is like you say and more. Thank you for writing this ...I'm so glad you got a chance to meet eachother, as I know she found you sister as well.  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
LeeJ ms..the depths of your vision amaze me and take me down into the center of that space makes me want to be part of the journey enjoyed it |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Such admiration and the character of the one receiving it could not be more greatly stated than has within this poem. Very well done LeeJ. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I am deeply touched and greatly moved by the phrasing and expression of this beautiful poem. I was correctly observant in realizing the depth of a woman I had only known as LeeJ and now, after being with her personally, I know as a tremndously vibrant spirit, and a person with a deep passion for life. Thank you dear friend, and sweet poetess for this beautiful poem. Just having my name authored by you is in itself an honor. Thank you so much Liz |
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