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Open Poetry #33

Within Summers Caress

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2004-09-13 07:34 PM

Within Summers Caress

To live in Makakilo Cliffs,
where moonlight shines within
an eternal summers bliss,
where star filled nights find
me enjoying my sweethearts kiss,
where natures beauty lives in
perfect tranquility, where the
warm Hawaiian sun caresses the
mountains, the valleys,
and a silky sea.

JamesLee
September11
2004

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2004-09-14 01:31 AM

sounds nice

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

2 posted 2004-09-14 12:08 PM

Like it

Dave

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

3 posted 2004-09-14 02:59 PM

Yummy, and want to be there.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

4 posted 2004-09-14 03:21 PM

I was particularly caught by a "silky sea" - that's just what life should be like but never is - nor permanently at any rate.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2004-09-14 08:33 PM

Sounds very beautiful..love it James.
Hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2004-09-15 06:48 PM

Thank you passing shadows, Dave, Susan, Honeybunch and Enchantress for the lovely responses...James

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