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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2004-09-13 03:09 PM

I am shattered
by the quiet
that greets me
feeling the something
that is missing
as I wear the thinnness
of my unlaced mood

M
* I should delete this...would somebody please??
it definitely doesn't go with my face

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (09-13-2004 04:45 PM).]

E S West
Member

since 2004-08-31

Posts 116
California

1 posted 2004-09-13 06:13 PM

Why wold you want to delete a nice poem like that? ...E S West

"always be true to SELF, and follow your heart.."
" Ignorance is the root of all evil "

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

2 posted 2004-09-13 06:35 PM

I had this feeling
Carols of early christmas
and the sacrifice

to the cartel service
early for christmas

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

3 posted 2004-09-13 07:38 PM

I agree. Why delete this? I think it has a fine quality about it-- the moment of hesitance and desire to express. I think it displays it well in just few words.
miscellanea

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

4 posted 2004-09-13 07:51 PM

ahh . . . but dont you see, Maureen?

it is perfect then:

as I wear the thinnness
of my unlaced mood

*smile*

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2004-09-13 08:19 PM

No no...no deletion!
Love your smile Maureen!!
Hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

6 posted 2004-09-13 08:24 PM

That smile is really nice, M-lady. But, why should the poem be deleted? It's nice, too.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

7 posted 2004-09-13 08:32 PM

Sorry everyone...was just a weak moment of loneliness.

hugs and thanks
M

MyHeartofShadows
Member

since 2004-09-04

Posts 88
Hyattsville, MD

8 posted 2004-09-13 09:03 PM

I agree with the others, well said and don’t delete it. I am often shattered by the quiet, most often late night and early morning. You wear the smile well.

Chanson
Senior Member

since 2000-08-19

Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle

9 posted 2004-09-13 10:45 PM

But you are smiling and that's a good thing. *s (Your words caught the mood nicely though.)

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

10 posted 2004-09-14 12:56 PM

totally understand

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

11 posted 2004-09-14 01:24 AM

Are you not smiling today?

You know I know that shattered feeling,
but I could never write it like you do.

Hang in there Maur~

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