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A Touch
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A Touch |
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time prophet Member
since 2003-07-30
Posts 371In New Zealand Amongst the Ancient Trees |
The midnight hour is wrought and you fill my toughts sleep is something that needs to be re-taught a touch is all I need |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
the last line sums up the entire poem very powerful! |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Yes! Very nicely expressed. misc'e |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
very, very nice |
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quatro Member
since 2003-04-29
Posts 392Galveston, Texas |
It's amazing how much power and energy there is in a touch. Nicely done! quarto |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
time prophet Good, enjoyed the read. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yeah, me too |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Words are nice, but a touch speaks volumes.. understanding here..I am feeling it with ya! Love and hugs ~ARh  Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
well tp I bought new pillows..so maybe I will get to sleep for a change  M |
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time prophet Member
since 2003-07-30
Posts 371In New Zealand Amongst the Ancient Trees |
Thanks all, one of those nights when sleep hard to come by, come to think of it thats most nights, except the mind was wandering on this one. "M" new pillows just might do the trick. |
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