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Reading Poetry and Art |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Reading Poetry and Art In reading lines of artistry Your taste will sip to some degree A brew of leaves that touched your life And made you dance your music’s fife It will be, as none other, not Even your sister or brother But a moment of lever’s last To slip into forever’s past For you are the all of rhyme That is the shawl of father time The change that makes forever’s tea The brewing of eternity This is the nectar of the brew The senses touch of cleaver view The substance of the common soil That brings the pot unto a boil We stand apart and yet as one Until the tea is brewed and done |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
For you are the all of rhyme That is the shawl of father time The change that makes forever’s tea The brewing of eternity You bring such smiles, so easily Sey...thank you for that. You ARE a gift!  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
You sir, are an early morning prozac a fragrant positive mood the rhyme of healthy mind and heart This was beautiful! Morning and Happy Friday! Just think, still another week has already passed? Where does it go? |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Goooood morning, Sy, Ah, you do bring out the wannabe artist in me! Love these lines (as well as your total masterpiece): In reading lines of artistry Your taste will sip to some degree A brew of leaves that touched your life And made you dance your music’s fife miscellanea |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You sure brew some potent tea... always enough for the poets, and me.    |
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time prophet Member
since 2003-07-30
Posts 371In New Zealand Amongst the Ancient Trees |
We stand apart and yet as one Until the tea is brewed and done Yes quite so Seymour, your spout produce's more wisdom than many I have known. |
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sim0riah Member
since 2004-09-07
Posts 253Wyoming USA |
One day I hope to write as well as you sim0riah Only at night you can see the depth of the sun |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Morning Sy! And I see you have brewed the tea this morn. Wonderful brew it is too I might add! ~Morning hugs, Nancy~ ~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
When an artist is a poet... those of us who appreciate their gifts are doubly blessed. *S* Nectar indeed, my friend... and it sustains us! *S* Excellent work! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning my fine nectar brewster! "We stand apart and yet as one Until the tea is brewed and done" ~ What a lovely thought...  Mr. T., you are one heckuvan artistic poet! EA P.S. I must apologize. When I have wished for you to always have lots of wind in your sails, I hadn't been thinking of hurricane force ones! I must be far more careful as to how I word my wishes from now on! |
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quatro Member
since 2003-04-29
Posts 392Galveston, Texas |
"In reading lines of artistry Your taste will sip to some degree A brew of leaves that touched your life And made you dance your music’s fife" I loved this...poetically artistic; the whole thing is pretty tasteful! quatro |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Gentle, You are truly gentle.  LeeJ And you are a flower in my eye. Good morning sweet. miscellanea You are an artist to me. Hugs Sunshine I send you a life time of tea leaves. time prophet, A fine compliment, thank you. sim0riah You do, you do. Nancy, Always enjoy a brew with you. suthern One of the nicest compliments I ever recieved. Hugs. Earth Angel LOL yes you did send me alot of wind. But who thought it would turn into a hurricane? quatro Thank you so much. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing, |
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Daniel Storm Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 91New York |
An excellent analogy here and there are so many blends (people) I really like this a lot, Seymour, thanks. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
I am apple~cinnamon flavor or vanilla....put on that pot of tea... ~Love and hugs ~ARH  Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"For you are the all of rhyme That is the shawl of father time" Wonderful line here, Sy. This made me warm all over. Yes, we are apart but one. I liked that last couplet a whole bunch, too! Stay safe, gentle man. ...jo |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Daniel It is I that thank you for the understanding reply. Romantic, I'll take all three, thank you dear. iliana, Thank you and got my fingrs crossed with Ivan. |
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